I have a little ambition. I want to write something memorable about love. I want to be able to write something approximately 2 sentences long that sums up what I've learnt about love.... actually I'll make my first attempt right now. Are you ready? Here goes..
"Love makes sense"
That's all I've got so far.
I quite like that actually. Should I try another one? Here goes...
"Love is the hardest thing to explain but the easiest thing to understand"
Oh man I like that one!! I don't fully agree with it but I like it.
Let's try another...
"Love makes perfect sense and no sense at all"
Hmm, that one was a bit less catchy and too wordy.
Let me try another...
"Love is perfectly indescribable"
No, that's boring and lacking in substance.
Let's go again...
"Love makes me drive safely"
Not bad, slightly humorous, thought-provoking and powerful because of its simple naivity.
Any more? Nah that'll do for now.
Update (9.nov.07)
i thought of another one. Here it is:
"love is a doing word"
Or have i stolen that one?
....
OK a few hours have passed and I fancy having another go. I don't think I can improve on the above but I'll have a go...
OK first up...
A lonely man hates love.
A man in love hates hate.
Nice concept, poor execution. Oh well.
Try another? I probably shouldn't because I'm tired but I might as well seeing as I'm here. Here's another...
Love cannot survive in your heart, it must be given away or it will die.
That was a bit cheesy and perhaps not completely true, but cute anyway. OK what's next?....
A man without love is like a fish in a bowl - going nowhere
Nah, that's poo. Lastly for now:
A woman in love is like a bird hovering on a gentle breeze
Almost good.
OK I'm off to assemble my new bed
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This is pathetic! Brian Draggon understands love better than you can!